The ability to not succeed is what i fear the most.
The only obstacle in the way of me succeeding,
is looking right at me in the mirror. Myself.
The feeling i get when i picture myself a failure,
is unexplainable.
Its like everything stops and I'm just sitting there thinking.
Could this really happen?
What if it really happened?
Till this day it hasn't,
and i plan on keeping it that way.
This is really deep, I like how you asked yourself question in the poem it really got me to ask myself those question well done jackie well done
ReplyDeletegood poem, but you should just look towards life with a positive attitued and you will realize that you are very happy
ReplyDeleteJon, I like this poem. I especially like the topic. What I would ask is that you try to let your readers know how you feel by making them feel it. For example, when you say it is inexplicable...try to describe that...use simile or metaphor...to paint a picture in the readers' mind.
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